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Feeling stuck with your WIP?

You know the feeling: you’re reading through a draft of your novel, screenplay, or TV spec and something just feels off. But you can’t quite put your finger on why.

Don’t give up on your draft. The problem isn’t you. It’s structure, character motivation, setup and payoff, or some other diagnosable and fixable issue.

How every post works

Source → Mechanism → Tool

Every week: practical writing lessons from the pop culture currently making headlines, each with a tool to apply the lesson to your WIP. Here’s one from a recent post.

Source

Toy Story 4

For three films, Woody is loyal to his kid. By the end of Toy Story 4, he walks away from his kid. Instead of feeling like a betrayal, it has viewers reaching for Kleenex. Why?

Mechanism

Sell the want so the need lands

  1. Sell the want
  2. Hide the need in plain sight
  3. Honor the want before subverting it

The need fades into background noise until the climax forces it front and center.

Tool

A want/need worksheet

A new Under the Hood Toolkit worksheet for building a healthy want/need journey for any character. Free for two weeks, like every WLE tool.

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Tucker May

About Tucker

I’m a working mystery novelist taking the books, shows, and films you already love, finding the gear turning underneath, and handing you the tool. Same method, new source every time.